Analysis of The Two Men

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



THERE were two youths of equal age,
     Wit, station, strength, and parentage;
     They studied at the self-same schools,
     And shaped their thoughts by common rules.

One pondered on the life of man,
     His hopes, his endings, and began
     To rate the Market's sordid war
     As something scarce worth living for.

"I'll brace to higher aims," said he,
     "I'll further Truth and Purity;
     Thereby to mend and mortal lot
     And sweeten sorrow. Thrive I not,

"Winning their hearts, my kind will give
     Enough that I may lowly live,
     And house my Love in some dim dell,
     For pleasing them and theirs so well."

Idly attired, with features wan,
     In secret swift he labored on;
     Such press of power had brought much gold
     Applied to things of meaner mould.

Sometimes he wished his aims had been
     To gather gains like other men;
     Then thanked his God he'd traced his track
     Too far for wish to drag him back.

He lookèd from his loft one day
     To where his slighted garden lay;
     Nettles and hemlock hid each lawn,
     And every flower was starved and gone.

He fainted in his heart, whereon
     He rose, and sought his plighted one,
     Resolved to loose her bond withal,
     Lest she should perish in his fall.

He met her with a careless air,
     As though he'd ceased to find her fair,
     And said: "True love is dust to me;
     I cannot kiss: I tire of thee!"

(That she might scorn him was he fain,
     To put her sooner out of pain;
     For incensed love breathes quick and dies,
     When famished love a-lingering lies.)

Once done, his soul was so betossed,
     It found no more the force it lost:
     Hope was his only drink and food,
     And hope extinct, decay ensued.

And, living long so closely penned,
     He had not kept a single friend;
     He dwindled thin as phantoms be,
     And drooped to death in poverty....

Meantime his schoolmate had gone out
     To join the fortune-finding rout;
     He liked the winnings of the mart,
     But wearied of the working part.

He turned to seek a privy lair,
     Neglecting note of garb and hair,
     And day by day reclined and thought
     How he might live by doing nought.

"I plan a valued scheme," he said
     To some. "But lend me of your bread,
     And when the vast result looms nigh,
     In profit you shall stand as I."

Yet they took counsel to restrain
     Their kindness till they saw the gain;
     And, since his substance now had run,
     He rose to do what might be done.

He went unto his Love by night,
     And said: "My Love, I faint in fight:
     Deserving as thou dost a crown,
     My cares shall never drag thee down."

(He had descried a maid whose line
     Would hand her on much corn and wine,
     And held her far in worth above
     One who could only pray and love.)

But this Fair read him; whence he failed
     To do the deed so blithely hailed;
     He saw his projects wholly marred,
     And gloom and want oppressed him hard;

Till, living to so mean an end,
     Whereby he'd lost his every friend,
     He perished in a pauper sty,
     His mate the dying pauper nigh.

And moralists, reflecting, said,
     As "dust to dust" in burial read
     Was echoed from each coffin-lid,
     "These men were like in all they did."


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Poetic Form Quatrain  (86%)
Metre 10111101 11010100 11010111 01111101 11010111 11110001 11010101 11011101 11110111 11010100 11110101 01010111 10111111 01111101 01110111 11010111 10011101 01011101 111101111 01111101 01111111 11011101 11111111 11111111 11111111 11110101 1001111 0100101101 1100111 1101111 0111011 11110011 11010101 11111101 01111111 110111011 11111111 11010111 1111101 110101001 1111111 11110111 11110101 01010101 01011101 11110101 11011101 01110100 111111 11010101 11010101 11010101 11110101 01011101 01110101 11111101 11010111 11111111 01010111 01011111 11110101 11011101 01110111 11111111 11101111 01111101 01011101 11110111 1110111 11011101 01010101 11110101 11111111 11011101 11110101 01010111 11011111 011111001 11000101 11010101 01000101 111101001 11011101 11010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,313
Words 570
Sentences 22
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 84
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

Thomas Hardy, was not a Scottish Minister, not a Moderator of the General Assembly of the Church of Scotland nor a Professor of Eccesiastical History at Edinburgh University. more…

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