Analysis of The Moth-Signal (On Egdon Heath)

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



'What are you still, still thinking,
He asked in vague surmise,
'That you stare at the wick unblinking
With those great lost luminous eyes?'

'O, I see a poor moth burning
In the candle-flame,' said she,
'Its wings and legs are turning
To a cinder rapidly.'

'Moths fly in from the heather,'
He said, 'now the days decline.'
'I know,' said she. 'The weather,
I hope, will at last be fine.

'I think,' she added lightly,
'I'll look out at the door.
The ring the moon wears nightly,
May be visible now no more.

She rose, and, little heeding,
Her husband then went on
With his attentive reading
In the annals of ages gone.

Outside the house a figure
Came from the tumulus near,
And speedily waxed bigger,
And clasped and called her Dear.

'I saw the pale-winged token
You sent through the crack,' sighed she.
'That moth is burnt and broken
With which you lured out me.

'And were I as the moth is
It might be better far
For one whose marriage troth is
Shattered as potsherds are!'

Then grinned the Ancient Briton
From the tumulus treed with pine:
'So, hearts are thwartly smitten
In these days as in mine!'


Scheme ABAB ACAC DEDE CFCF AXAX DGDG HCHC IJIJ HEHE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (89%)
Metre 1111110 110101 1111011 11111001 11101110 0010111 1101110 1010100 1101010 1110101 1111010 1111111 1111010 111101 0101110 11100111 1101010 010111 1101010 00101101 1101010 11011 0100110 010101 1101110 1110111 1111010 111111 0011011 111101 1111011 10111 1101010 101111 111110 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,071
Words 214
Sentences 14
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

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