Analysis of The Bedridden Peasant to an Unknown God

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



Much wonder I--here long low-laid -
   That this dead wall should be
Betwixt the Maker and the made,
   Between Thyself and me!

For, say one puts a child to nurse,
   He eyes it now and then
To know if better 'tis, or worse,
   And if it mourn, and when.

But Thou, Lord, giv'st us men our clay
   In helpless bondage thus
To Time and Chance, and seem'st straightway
   To think no more of us!

That some disaster cleft Thy scheme
   And tore us wide apart,
So that no cry can cross, I deem;
   For Thou art mild of heart,

And would'st not shape and shut us in
   Where voice can not he heard:
'Tis plain Thou meant'st that we should win
   Thy succour by a word.

Might but Thy sense flash down the skies
   Like man's from clime to clime,
Thou would'st not let me agonize
   Through my remaining time;

But, seeing how much Thy creatures bear -
   Lame, starved, or maimed, or blind -
Thou'dst heal the ills with quickest care
   Of me and all my kind.

Then, since Thou mak'st not these things be,
   But these things dost not know,
I'll praise Thee as were shown to me
   The mercies Thou would'st show!


Scheme ABAB CDCD XEXE FGFG HIHI JFJX KLKL BMBM
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11011111 111111 01010001 01101 11110111 111101 11110111 011101 111111101 010101 11010111 111111 11010111 011101 11111111 111111 011110110 111111 111111111 11101 11111101 111111 11111110 110101 110111101 111111 11011101 110111 111111111 111111 11110111 0101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,110
Words 207
Sentences 7
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

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