Analysis of The Under-Dogs



What have we done, Oh Lord, that we
                                        Are evil starred?
How have we erred and sinned to be
                                        So scourged and scarred?
Lash us, Oh Lord, with scorpion whips,
                                        We can but run;
But harken to our piteous lips:
                                        What have we done?

How have we sinned to rouse your wrath,
                                        To earn your scorn?
Stony and steep has been our path
                                        Since we were born.
Oh for a sign, a hope, a word,
                                        A heaven glance;
Why is your hand against us, Lord?
                                        Give us a chance.

What shall we do, Oh God, to gain
                                        Your mercy seat?
Shall we live out our lives in pain
                                        And dark defeat?
Shall we in servitude bow low
                                        Unto the end?
How we would hope, could we but know
                                        You are our friend!

We are the disinherited,
                                        The doomed, the lost.
For breath with dust and ashes fed,
                                        We pay the cost.
Dumb mouths! Yet though we bleed, with prayer
                                        We kiss the sword;
Aye, even dying we forbear
                                        To curse Thee, Lord.


Scheme ABABCDCD EFEFXGHG IJIJKLKL BXXXMHMH
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1101 11110111 1101 111111001 1111 11011011 1111 11111111 1111 100111101 1101 11010101 0101 11110111 1101 11111111 1101 111110101 0101 1101011 1001 11111111 11101 1101 0101 11110101 1101 11111111 1101 1101011 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,469
Words 174
Sentences 16
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 43
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

52 sec read
89

Robert William Service

Robert William Service was a poet and writer sometimes referred to as the Bard of the Yukon He is best-known for his writings on the Canadian North including the poems The Shooting of Dan McGrew The Law of the Yukon and The Cremation of Sam McGee His writing was so expressive that his readers took him for a hard-bitten old Klondike prospector not the later-arriving bank clerk he actually was Robert William Service was born 16 January 1874 in Preston England but also lived in Scotland before emigrating to Canada in 1894 Service went to the Yukon Territory in 1904 as a bank clerk and became famous for his poems about this region which are mostly in his first two books of poetry He wrote quite a bit of prose as well and worked as a reporter for some time but those writings are not nearly as well known as his poems He travelled around the world quite a bit and narrowly escaped from France at the beginning of the Second World War during which time he lived in Hollywood California He died 11 September 1958 in France Incidentally he played himself in a movie called The Spoilers starring John Wayne and Marlene Dietrich more…

All Robert William Service poems | Robert William Service Books

7 fans

Discuss this Robert William Service poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The Under-Dogs" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/32676/the-under-dogs>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    15
    hours
    0
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    A group of lines forming a unit in a poem is called a _______.
    A rhyme
    B verse
    C stanza
    D sonnet