Analysis of Breton Wife
Robert William Service 1874 – 1958
A Wintertide we had been wed
When Jan went off to sea;
And now the laurel rose is red
And I wait on the quay.
His berthing boat I watch with dread,
For where, oh where is he?
"Weep not, brave lass," the Skipper said;
"Return to you he will;
In hospital he lies abed
In Rio in Brazil;
But though I know he is not dead,
I do not know his ill."
The Seaman's Hospital I wrote,
And soon there came reply.
The nurse's very words I quote:
"Your husband will not die;
But you must wait a weary boat -
I cannot tell you why."
The months of sun went snailing by.
I wrote by every mail,
Yet ever came the same reply:
"Your patience must not fail.
But though your good lad will not die,
We cannot tell his ail."
* * * * * * * * *
Ten months have gone - he's back again,
But aged by years a score,
And tells me with a look of pain
He'll never voyage more;
And at the tide, with longing vain,
He stares from out the door.
And in his sleep he turns from me
And moans with bitter blame
Of Spanish jades beyond the sea
Who wrought him evil shame,
So ever in him bleak will be
The Ill That Has No Name.
Scheme | ABABAB ACACAC DEDEDE EFEFEF XGHGHG BIBIBI |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011111 111111 01010111 011101 1111111 111111 11110101 011111 0101101 010001 11111111 111111 0101011 011101 01010111 110111 11110101 110111 0111111 1111001 11010101 110111 11111111 110111 1 11111101 111101 01110111 110101 01011101 111101 00111111 011101 11010101 111101 11001111 011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,073 |
Words | 234 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 6, 6, 6, 1, 6, 6 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 115 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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