Analysis of Breton Wife



A Wintertide we had been wed
When Jan went off to sea;
And now the laurel rose is red
And I wait on the quay.
His berthing boat I watch with dread,
For where, oh where is he?

"Weep not, brave lass," the Skipper said;
"Return to you he will;
In hospital he lies abed
In Rio in Brazil;
But though I know he is not dead,
I do not know his ill."

The Seaman's Hospital I wrote,
And soon there came reply.
The nurse's very words I quote:
"Your husband will not die;
But you must wait a weary boat -
I cannot tell you why."

The months of sun went snailing by.
I wrote by every mail,
Yet ever came the same reply:
"Your patience must not fail.
But though your good lad will not die,
We cannot tell his ail."

*   *   *   *   *   *   *   *   *

Ten months have gone - he's back again,
But aged by years a score,
And tells me with a look of pain
He'll never voyage more;
And at the tide, with longing vain,
He stares from out the door.

And in his sleep he turns from me
And moans with bitter blame
Of Spanish jades beyond the sea
Who wrought him evil shame,
So ever in him bleak will be
The Ill That Has No Name.


Scheme ABABAB ACACAC DEDEDE EFEFEF XGHGHG BIBIBI
Poetic Form
Metre 011111 111111 01010111 011101 1111111 111111 11110101 011111 0101101 010001 11111111 111111 0101011 011101 01010111 110111 11110101 110111 0111111 1111001 11010101 110111 11111111 110111 1 11111101 111101 01110111 110101 01011101 111101 00111111 011101 11010101 111101 11001111 011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,073
Words 234
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 1, 6, 6
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Robert William Service

Robert William Service was a poet and writer sometimes referred to as the Bard of the Yukon He is best-known for his writings on the Canadian North including the poems The Shooting of Dan McGrew The Law of the Yukon and The Cremation of Sam McGee His writing was so expressive that his readers took him for a hard-bitten old Klondike prospector not the later-arriving bank clerk he actually was Robert William Service was born 16 January 1874 in Preston England but also lived in Scotland before emigrating to Canada in 1894 Service went to the Yukon Territory in 1904 as a bank clerk and became famous for his poems about this region which are mostly in his first two books of poetry He wrote quite a bit of prose as well and worked as a reporter for some time but those writings are not nearly as well known as his poems He travelled around the world quite a bit and narrowly escaped from France at the beginning of the Second World War during which time he lived in Hollywood California He died 11 September 1958 in France Incidentally he played himself in a movie called The Spoilers starring John Wayne and Marlene Dietrich more…

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