Analysis of An Old Story
Robert William Service 1874 – 1958
(Retold in Rhyme)
They threw him in a prison cell;
He moaned upon his bed.
And when he crept from coils of hell:
"Last night you killed," they said.
"last night in drunken rage you slew
A being brave with breath;
A radiant soul, because of you
Lies dark in death."
"last night I killed," he moaned distraught,
"When I was wild with wine;
I slew, and I remember naught . . .
O Mother, Mother mine!
"To what unbridled rage may lead
You taught me at your knew.
Why did I not your warning heed . . .
And now - the gallows tree.
"O Mother, Mother, come to me,
For I am sore distrest,
And I would kneel beside your knee
And weep upon your breast. . . ."
They stared at him; their lips were dumb,
Their eyes tear filled;
Then spoke the Priest: "She cannot come . . .
'Twas she you killed."
Scheme | X ABAB CDCD EFEF BCXG GBGX HIHI |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (24%) |
Metre | 101 11100101 110111 01111111 111111 11010111 010111 010010111 1101 11111101 111111 11010101 110101 11010111 111111 11111101 010101 11010111 11111 01110111 010111 11111101 1111 11011101 1111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 766 |
Words | 152 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 82 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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