Analysis of Self-Portrait

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



The steadfastness of generations of nobility
shows in the curving lines that form the eyebrows.
And the blue eyes still show traces of childhood fears
and of humility here and there, not of a servant's,
yet of one who serves obediantly, and of a woman.
The mouth formed as a mouth, large and accurate,
not given to long phrases, but to express
persuasively what is right. The forehead without guile
and favoring the shadows of quiet downward gazing.

This, as a coherent whole, only casually observed;
never as yet tried in suffering or succeeding,
held together for an enduring fulfillment,
yet so as if for times to come, out of these scattered things,
something serious and lasting were being planned.

Translated by Albert Ernest Flemming


Scheme XAXAXXXXB XBXXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 010101010100 1001011101 00111110111 0101001011101 11111101010 01110110100 11011101101 0100111010011 0100011101010 110010110100001 1011101001010 101011010010 11111111111101 101000100101 0101101010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 734
Words 127
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 5, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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