Analysis of Kabul



Oh, the beautiful city of Kabul wears a rugged mountain skirt,
And The rose is jealous of its lash-like thorns.
The dust of Kabul's blowing soil smarts lightly in my eyes,
But I love her, for knowledge and love both come from her dust.

I sing bright praises to her colourful tulips,
The beauty of her trees makes me blush.
How sparkling the water flows from Pul-i-Mastaan!
May Allah protect such beauty from the evil eye of man!

Khizr chose Kabul to Paradise,
For her mountains brought him near to heaven's delights.
The fort's dragon-sprawling walls guard the city well,
Each brick is more precious than the treasure of Shayagan.

Every street in Kabul fascinates the eye.
In the bazaars, Egypt's caravans pass by.
No one can count the beauteous moons on her rooftops,
And hundreds of lovely suns hide behind her walls.

Her morning's laugh is as gay as flowers,
Her dark nights shine like beautiful hair.
Her tuneful nightingales sing with flame in their notes,
Fiery songs like burning leaves, fall from their throats.

I sing to the gardens, Jahanara and Shahrara.
Even the Tuba of Paradise is Jealous of their greenery.


Scheme XXXX XXAA XXXA BBXX XCDD CX
Poetic Form
Metre 10100101101010101 00111011111 0111101110011 11101100111101 1111010110 010101111 11001011111 110011101010111 1110110 101011111001 011010110101 111110101011 10010101001 0001101011 1111011101 010110110101 0101111110 011111001 0101111011 100111011111 111010101 1001011011011100
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,111
Words 196
Sentences 15
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 149
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 20, 2023

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