Analysis of Waiting At The Window



These are my two drops of rain
Waiting on the window-pane.

I am waiting here to see
Which the winning one will be.

Both of them have different names.
One is John and one is James.

All the best and all the worst
Comes from which of them is first.

James has just begun to ooze.
He's the one I want to lose.

John is waiting to begin.
He's the one I want to win.

James is going slowly on.
Something sort of sticks to John.

John is moving off at last.
James is going pretty fast.

John is rushing down the pane.
James is going slow again.

James has met a sort of smear.
John is getting very near.

Is he going fast enough?
(James has found a piece of fluff.)

John has quickly hurried by.
(James was talking to a fly.)

John is there, and John has won!
Look! I told you! Here's the sun!


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG HH AX II JJ KK LL
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1010101 1110111 1010111 11111001 1110111 1010101 1111111 1110111 1011111 1110101 1011111 1110101 1011111 1110111 1110101 1110101 1110101 1110111 1110101 1110101 1110111 1110101 1110101 1110111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 763
Words 161
Sentences 26
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Alan Alexander Milne

Alan Alexander Milne was an English author, best known for his books about the teddy bear Winnie-the-Pooh and for various poems. Milne was a noted writer, primarily as a playwright, before the huge success of Pooh overshadowed all his previous work. more…

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