Analysis of Jasper’s Song

Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall 1883 (Gunnersbury, London) – 1922 (Vancouver)



WHO goes down through the slim green sallows,
Soon, so soon ?
Dawn is hard on the heels of the moon,
But never a lily the day-star knows
Is white, so white as the one who goes
Armed and shod, when the hyacinths darken.
Then hark, O harken !
And rouse the moths from the deep rose-mallows,
Call the wild hares down from the fallows,
Gather the silk of the young sea-poppies,
The bloom of the thistle, the bells of the foam;
Bind them all with a brown owl's feather,
Snare the winds in a golden tether,
Chase the clouds from the gipsy's weather, and follow, O follow, the white spring home.
Who goes past with the wind that chilled us,
Late, so late ?
Fortune leans on the farmer's gate,
Watching the round sun low in the south,

With a plume in his cap and a rose at his mouth.
But O, for the folk who were free and merry
There's never so much as a red rose-berry.
But old earth's warm as the wine that filled us,
And the fox and the little gray mouse skull build us
Walls of the sweet green gloom of the cedar,
A roof of bracken, a curtain of whin;
One more rouse ere the bowl reposes
Low in the dust of our lost red roses,
One more song ere the cold night closes, and welcome, O welcome the dark death in !


Scheme ABBAACCAAADEEDAFFG GHHAAEBAAX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 111 111101101 1100100111 111110111 1011010010 11110 0101101110 10111101 1001101110 01101001101 111101110 101001010 101101100101100111 111101111 111 10110101 100111001 101011001111 11101101010 11011101110 1111101111 001001011111 1101111010 0111001011 1111011 10011101110 1111011100101100110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,189
Words 238
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 18, 10
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 461
Words per stanza (avg) 120
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall

Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall, was a Canadian writer who was born in England but lived in Canada from the time she was seven. She was once "thought to be the best Canadian poet of her generation." more…

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