Analysis of Dawn Wind



Wind, just arisen -
(Off what cool mattress of marsh-moss
In tented boughs leaf-drawn before the stars,
Or niche of cliff under the eagles?)
You of living things,
So gay and tender and full of play -
Why do you blow on my thoughts - like cut flowers
Gathered and laid to dry on this paper, rolled out of dead wood?

I see you
Shaking that flower at me with soft invitation
And frisking away,
Deliciously rumpling the grass…

So you fluttered the curtains about my cradle,
Prattling of fields
Before I had had my milk…
Did I stir on my pillow, making to follow you, Fleet One?
I - swaddled, unwinged, like a bird in the egg.

Let be
My dreams that crackle under your breath…
You have the dust of the world to blow on…
Do not tag me and dance away, looking back…
I am too old to play with you,
Eternal Child.


Scheme AXXXXBXX CABX XXXAX XXXXCX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11110111 011110101 111110010 11101 110100111 11111111110 100111111011111 111 101101111010 0101 0100101 111001001110 1011 0111111 111111010110111 111101001 11 111101011 1101101111 11110101101 11111111 0101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 801
Words 159
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 5, 6
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lola Ridge

Lola Ridge was an anarchist poet and an influential editor of avant-garde feminist and Marxist publications best remembered for her long poems and poetic sequences She along with other political poets of the early Modernist period has been coming under increasing critical scrutiny at the beginning of the twenty-first century more…

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