Analysis of The Waiting

John Greenleaf Whittier 1807 (Haverhill) – 1892 (Hampton Falls)



I wait and watch: before my eyes
Methinks the night grows thin and gray;
I wait and watch the eastern skies
To see the golden spears uprise
Beneath the oriflamme of day!

Like one whose limbs are bound in trance
I hear the day-sounds swell and grow,
And see across the twilight glance,
Troop after troop, in swift advance,
The shining ones with plumes of snow!

I know the errand of their feet,
I know what mighty work is theirs;
I can but lift up hands unmeet,
The threshing-floors of God to beat,
And speed them with unworthy prayers.

I will not dream in vain despair
The steps of progress wait for me
The puny leverage of a hair
The planet's impulse well may spare,
A drop of dew the tided sea.

The loss, if loss there be, is mine,
And yet not mine if understood;
For one shall grasp and one resign,
One drink life's rue, and one its wine,
And God shall make the balance good.

Oh power to do! Oh baffled will!
Oh prayer and action! ye are one.
Who may not strive, may yet fulfil
The harder task of standing still,
And good but wished with God is done!


Scheme ABAAB CDCCD EFEEF GHGGH IJIIJ KLKKL
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11010111 1011101 11010101 11010110 010111 11111101 11011101 0101011 11010101 01011111 11010111 11110111 1111111 0111111 01110101 11110101 0111111 010100101 01010111 0111011 01111111 0111101 11110101 11110111 01110101 110111101 11010111 1111111 01011101 01111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,031
Words 205
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 05, 2023

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John Greenleaf Whittier

John Greenleaf Whittier was an influential American Quaker poet and ardent advocate of the abolition of slavery in the United States. more…

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