Analysis of Hymn I

John Greenleaf Whittier 1807 (Haverhill) – 1892 (Hampton Falls)



O THOU, whose presence went before
Our fathers in their weary way,
As with Thy chosen moved of yore
The fire by night, the cloud by day!
When from each temple of the free,
A nation's song ascends to Heaven,
Most Holy Father! unto Thee
May not our humble prayer be given?
Thy children all, though hue and form
Are varied in Thine own good will,
With Thy own holy breathings warm,
And fashioned in Thine image still.
We thank Thee, Father! hill and plain
Around us wave their fruits once more,
And clustered vine, and blossomed grain,
Are bending round each cottage door.
And peace is here; and hope and love
Are round us as a mantle thrown,
And unto Thee, supreme above,
The knee of prayer is bowed alone.
But oh, for those this day can bring,
As unto us, no joyful thrill;
For those who, under Freedom's wing,
Are bound in Slavery's fetters still:
For those to whom Thy written word
Of light and love is never given;
For those whose ears have never heard
The promise and the hope of heaven!
For broken heart, and clouded mind,
Whereon no human mercies fall;
Oh, be Thy gracious love inclined,
Who, as a Father, pitiest all!
And grant, O Father! that the time
Of Earth's deliverance may be near,
When every land and tongue and clime
The message of Thy love shall hear;
When, smitten as with fire from heaven,
The captive's chain shall sink in dust,
And to his fettered soul be given
The glorious freedom of the just!


Scheme ABABCDCDEFEFGAGAHIHIJFJFKDKDLMLMNOEPDQDQ
Poetic Form Etheree  (28%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110101 101001101 11110111 010110111 11110101 010101110 11010101 1110101110 11011101 11001111 1111011 01001101 11110101 01111111 01010101 11011101 01110101 11110101 01010101 01111101 11111111 11011101 11110101 1101101 11111101 110111010 11111101 010001110 11010101 1110101 11110101 1101011 01110101 110100111 110010101 01011111 1101110110 0111101 011101110 010010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,384
Words 264
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 40
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,101
Words per stanza (avg) 262
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 11, 2023

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John Greenleaf Whittier

John Greenleaf Whittier was an influential American Quaker poet and ardent advocate of the abolition of slavery in the United States. more…

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