Analysis of Ike Walton's Prayer

James Whitcomb Riley 1849 (Greenfield) – 1916 (Indianapolis)



I crave, dear Lord,
No boundless hoard
Of gold and gear,
Nor jewels fine,
Nor lands, nor kine,
Nor treasure-heaps of anything.-
Let but a little hut be mine
Where at the hearthstore I may hear
The cricket sing,
And have the shine
Of one glad woman's eyes to make,
For my poor sake,
Our simple home a place divine;-
Just the wee cot-the cricket's chirr-
Love, and the smiling face of her.

I pray not for
Great riches, nor
For vast estates, and castle-halls,-
Give me to hear the bare footfalls
Of children o’er
An oaken floor,
New-risen with sunshine, or bespread
With but the tiny coverlet
And pillow for the baby’s head;
And pray Thou, may
The door stand open and the day
Send ever in a gentle breeze,
With fragrance from the locust-trees,
And drowsy moan of doves, and blur
Of robin-chirps, and drove of bees,
With afterhushes of the stir
Of intermingling sounds, and then
The good-wife and the smile of her
Filling the silences again-
The cricket’s call,
And the wee cot,
Dear Lord of all,
Deny me not!

I pray not that
Men tremble at
My power of place
And lordly sway, -
I only pray for simple grace
To look my neighbor in the face
Full honestly from day to day-
Yield me this horny palm to hold,
And I’ll not pray
For gold;-
The tanned face, garlanded with mirth,
It hath the kingliest smile on earth-
The swart brow, diamonded with sweat,
Hath never need of coronet.
And so I reach,
Dear Lord, to Thee,
And do beseech
Thou givest me
The wee cot, and the cricket’s chirr,
Love, and the glad sweet face of her.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1101 1101 1101 1111 1101110 11010111 1101111 0101 0101 11110111 1111 101010101 10110101 10010110 1111 1101 11010101 1111011 1101 111 1101111 110101 0101011 0111 01110001 11000101 11010101 01011101 11010111 11101 10100101 01100110 10010001 0101 0011 1111 0111 1111 1101 11011 011 11011101 11110001 11001111 11110111 0111 11 011111 1101111 011111 11011101 0111 1111 0101 111 01100101 10011110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,531
Words 290
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 15, 23, 20
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 387
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 26, 2023

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James Whitcomb Riley

James Whitcomb Riley was an American writer, poet, and best-selling author. During his lifetime he was known as the "Hoosier Poet" and "Children's Poet" for his dialect works and his children's poetry respectively. more…

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