Analysis of From an Upper Verandah

James Brunton Stephens 1835 (Scotland) – 1902



What happier haunt could the gods allot
For loftiest musing to sage or bard?—
Yet I would that this upper verandah did not
Look down on my beautiful Neighbour's Back-yard!

I stir the afflatus: Descend, O ye Nine!
Let the crystalline gates of the soul be unbarred!
No. My thoughts will keep running in one fixed line—
The clothes-line that hangs in my Neighbour's Back-yard!

Let me gaze on the hills; let me think of the sea;
Of the dawn rosy-fingered—the night silver-starred:—
(What dear little feet must the owner's be
Of those stockings that hang in my Neighbour's Back-yard!)

Let me tune my soul to a measure devout:—
Ah, the musical mood is all jangled and jarred,
While things with borders, and things without,
Keep flutt'ring down there in my Neighbour's Back-yard!

Are the True and the Good and the Beautiful dead,
That I win not one gleam of Pierian regard?
(Does she suffer, I wonder, from cold in the head?—
Such a lot of mouchoirs in my Neighbour's Back-yard!)

Comes the fit. While it sways me, high themes would I sing!
Prometheus! Achilles! Have at you! En grade!
Alexander the Great—(oh that I were a string
On that apron hung out in my Neighbour's Back-yard!)

I will shut my eyes fast—I have hit it at last,
Now my purest Ideals flit by me unmarred;
And odours of memory rise from the past,
(And an odour of suds from my Neighbour's Back-yard!)

Ah, yes! when the eyelids together are prest,
Every vestige of earth we throw off and discard.
(These are flannels, I think. Is she weak in the chest?—
There! I'm looking again at my Neighbour's Back-yard!)
Since the Muses back out, let Philosophy in:
Let me ponder its problems cold and hard.
Ah! Philosophy dies in a celibate grin
At that bolster-case down in my Neighbour's Back-yard!

Oh shame on my rapidly silvering hairs!
Oh shame on this veteran battered and scarred!

I to be witched with these frilled—affairs!
Confound my neighbour! Confound her Back-yard!

Why seek for the blossoms of Auld Lang Syne,
When the boughs where they budded are blasted and charred?—
Faugh! the whole concern's too alkaline—
It's washing day in my Neighbour's Back-yard!


Scheme ABAB CACB DBDB EBEB FBFB GXGB HAHB IBIBJBJB KB KB CBCB
Poetic Form
Metre 1100110101 11101111 1111110111 1111100111 110101111 1010110111 11111100111 0111101111 111101111101 101101001101 1110110101 11101101111 11111101001 101001111001 111100101 111101111 101001001001 1111111101 111011011001 1011101111 101111111111 101011111 01001111001 11101101111 111111111111 1110011111 0111001101 0111111111 1110101011 1001011111001 111011111001 11100111111 101011101000 1110110101 101001001001 11101101111 111110011 11111001001 111111101 011101011 1110101111 10111111001 10101110 110101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,108
Words 383
Sentences 37
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 8, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 149
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 21, 2023

1:59 min read
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James Brunton Stephens

James Brunton Stephens was a Scottish-born Australian poet, author of Convict Once. more…

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