Analysis of Struck By Lightning



Struck By Lightning

Love at first sight, struck by lightning
I say your name out loud
As if speaking you into existence is
Magic just like you
Twinkling sparkles and dust
Meant to generate your body
Your face, your voice
And your soul right before me
The same way you make
Goosebumps on my skin
Accelerate my pulse
A smile on my face
And joy in my heart.

You are subtlety in fine feminine form 
Your name comes in silence
As soft as echoes across
Every moment in my thoughts
Repeating petals of flowers
Whose blossoms decorate
A secret garden
Millions of wishes for you
To be happy everywhere
Smiling all at once
Breathing and thinking of me
Beaming with joy
And coloring my world.

Awestruck and amazed all by you
You can walk up or simply stand
Still as a marble statue
Soft as a summer breeze
Or quick as a thunderbolt
And the effect is the same
Your face and your name
Strike the same way
You move me
A force of nature
Making me pivot
In your amorous direction
And suddenly I am all yours!

Copyright © 2024 Charles Edward York
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Scheme A AXXBXCXCXXXXX XDXXXXEBXDCXX BXBXXFFXCGXEX XG
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 11111110 111111 11101010101 10111 1001001 1110110 1111 0111011 01111 1111 01011 01111 01011 11100011001 111010 1111001 10010011 01010110 11010 01010 1011011 111010 10111 1001011 1011 010011 1001111 11111101 110101 110101 111010 0001101 11011 1011 111 01110 10110 01100010 01001111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,259
Words 241
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 13, 13, 13, 2
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 46

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Written on May 07, 2024

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on May 07, 2024

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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