Analysis of Running water

Doreene Felder 1967 (Phila.)



Are you running wisdom
With that vision
Are you changing a life
For your bad decision
Are you misleading others
Cause you want to be in charge
Find a good solution
Instead of mind pollution
Find a positive outcome
Instead of deceiving  someone
What kind a person would you be
To destroy others lives
And try to remain free
What kind of person would you be
To destroy  a life that God has set free??


Scheme ABCBDEBBABFGFFF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 111010 1110 111001 111010 1101010 1111101 101010 0111010 101001 0110101 11010111 101101 011011 11110111 1010111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 406
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 320
Words per stanza (avg) 77

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Written on May 02, 2024

Submitted by doreenefelder192 on May 02, 2024

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