Analysis of SHOWER

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I can not sleep for the second night, so I pace back and forth. I drink warm milk and shower cold, but I still can not get this thought out of my head, which stands right before my mind. I want to holler and scream, but life is just a dream.

Where did I bury that bone years ago? Why do I continue to know my way home? Everybody was having a good time except you and me. We were talking over a cheap glass of wine about how the world would start and end; we were calling everyone friends.

Let me wash away everything but my love for this newfound world of mine, for I am no longer looking down the barrel of a gun I did not lose and have yet to win; I have swallowed their pills of sin.


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Characters 688
Words 146
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 177
Words per line (avg) 47
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Written on April 29, 2024

Submitted by Oakley on April 29, 2024

Modified by Oakley on May 01, 2024

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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