Analysis of My One, My First, My End, Onein the Same
Amanda "Manna" Harsin 1980 (Brigham City utah)
My One, My First, My End.
One In The Same!!!
My one was merely a child’s dream.
A little Girl with a dim hopeful gleam.
Growing up all she was taught was Hate.
Ma & Pa showed her how to Love. Maybe there a thing called fate?
“Why yes my child” she heard with an evil hiss
A little girl shown little Love.
Silently she cries to whoever or whatever is above,
Sad little girl does not stand a chance.
For as much as they taught her Love,
Trying to save her,
Evil never lost it’s Glance.
Her Mother’s dark forces took her away.
Laughing, with the promise to know nothing but negative hate.
Right back here she will come
She will never know love,
only pain after all she is dumb.
When she is calm, and the Lord tries to boost her up,
I will be right here telling her what's up.
I will earn her trust,
then take away her first cub with a mighty thrust. .
Here I go she says, I am heart.
Look away never.
I lay in wait, to take her last cub
Laughing as I ripped her world apart.
I shall take her cubs and make them mine.
They will hate her, this, a goal of mine.
Now they in my web, as I warned,
Keeping only evil words said.
They are my puppets, even after she is dead.
After all I am your Mother, she said.
Scheme | XX AABBXCCDCEDXBFCFGGHHIEXIJJXKKK |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111 1001 11110011 0101101101 101111111 11101111010111 11111111101 01011101 100111010110101 110111101 11111101 10110 1010111 0101101001 101010111011001 111111 111011 101101111 111100111101 1111110011 11101 110101110101 11111111 10110 110111011 101110101 111010111 111010111 11011111 10101011 111101010111 1011111011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,234 |
Words | 273 |
Sentences | 24 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 30 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 454 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 123 |
About this poem
This is a glimpse of my childhood. As I sat here starting my autobiography, this poem happened. So I felt the need to share.
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