Analysis of Kaylee.

Sulfur 2002 (london)



Her skin was warm when mine was cold,
Her hands intertwined with mine.
My face glowed silver, i wished it were gold,
I shut my eyes and wished for more.
But you bite your lip, I bit my tongue,
The laughs we shared had sprung our love.
You get me like no one else. Yet you shove.
You shove me away. I understand that now.
Your words cut deep, sharp as a sword,
Leaving wounds in my heart, but ignored.
You jerk the knife inside my chest.
Still, I yearn for your touch, your love.
The pain you bring, I can't erase.
Without you, I am just a waste.
For in your eyes, I see a flicker,
Of a love that once burned brighter and thicker.
Brighter than this. Whatever ‘this’ is.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01111111 0100111 1111011101 11110111 111111111 011111101 1111111111 1110110111 11111101 101011101 11010111 11111111 01111101 01111101 101111010 10111110010 10111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 673
Words 148
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 506
Words per stanza (avg) 132

About this poem

This is about my 'gf' Kaylee. I love her but, i just dont think she loves me.

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Written on February 22, 2024

Submitted by KannibalKitz on February 27, 2024

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