Analysis of PRAYER



 
Don't be shy! Go to him! You and He are the same in your vulnerabilities. The cascade of memories of your childish self moved into him with responsibility. Like a crying, babbling little child who can only understand the gentle nanny's song that wants to rock him by hugging and rocking him, and he doesn't really know why he wants to look into the well-lit, shining lamp-eyes with his blood-streaked, broken eyeballs?

Do you see the priceless holy qualities of his face?! Behind every tiny, carefully constructed molecule-cell, a million small humming machines control and arrange the welcoming angelic smile into an acceptable tremor, which creates a special peace and comforts with medicine.

Wandering through strange landscapes with a state of deeply felt joy and latent pain, their carbuncle eyes speak to each other of the loves of loyalty; one of them is a wonder bug full of hesitancy and extravagance - see, he's still trying to mask the childish agonies of his pain with his smile.

It's as if you share the same wavelength: you are both heralds of culture. Don't be so ashamed of your stupidity! Just go there with courage and you will see that he will greet you with blessed directness, and as a gift of his priceless heart, he will flash the smile of Heaven on you.

Just wear it! Because you will not remain blushing, even if you were created for a human, embrace him in the past, asking for help, with the waterfalls of your true pearls, calmly fall into his swan's neck.

Her cherry lips are waiting for you as if she were her first love, they call you waiting, your devoted Beloved loves you! Just go to him boldly and address him!


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Poetic Form
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Characters 1,653
Words 302
Sentences 15
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 218
Words per line (avg) 49
Letters per stanza (avg) 218
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Written on April 05, 2024

Submitted by oasev on April 04, 2024

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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