Analysis of It Was A Thirteen Hour Drive (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



It Was A Thirteen Hour Drive   (Bussokusekika)

It is official
I am too old for this shit
Fifteen freaking hours
And I used to drive thirty
Technically I gained two
It was a thirteen hour drive

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   3/30/2024


Scheme X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 110111011 11010 1111111 011010 0111110 1000111 11011101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 235
Words 43
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

Well I think I may have slept three hours last night and I rose early to drive back to Van horn after a El Paso run…And I drank me around 8 seagrams for breakfast and drove another 950 miles back to rainy California…950+375=1325 miles in two days…In my youth it would not have been all that bad as someone once sang about spring chickens…Plus I lollygaged for at least two hours oh well…

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Written on March 30, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on March 30, 2024

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