Analysis of Shoes



          I'm just a pair of dried up shoes...
           In need of some laces and a good shine.

I want to be worked again,
            At least once a day
            To loosen up my leather...

With a gentle rub
            And a strong grip,

I know that you will fit.
            So come slide inside
           My soft worn shoes..


Scheme AX XXX XX XXA
Poetic Form Etheree  (50%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11011111 0111100011 1111101 11101 1101110 10101 0011 111111 11101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 385
Words 64
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 2, 3
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

Between 2 close friends after menopause...

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Written on November 30, 2023

Submitted by nulllulu641 on February 16, 2024

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Leslie A Lamb

I have been writing for yrs. Poems express my emotions, journals relieve the stress, and my political writings voice my opinion. more…

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