Analysis of Heart's Torment.

BrijMohan Poply 1946 (New Delhi)



Whenever............
My heart doesn't agree,
Starts its own song,
Seems to torment me,
A little more long..........

Please dear heart.......
Listen to me........
With my condition,
Keep kind to me..........

Let Everything be suitable..........
Nothing to keep under the table..........
Try to make you happy,
For the time-being..............

Let me have...........
A relief sigh...........
After that....... you also,
Become hi-fi.............


Scheme XABAB XAXA CCAX XDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 010 111001 1111 1111 01011 111 1011 11010 1111 1101100 101110010 111110 10110 111 0011 101110 0111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 446
Words 79
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Here when the heart troubles like not listening to any excuse becomes main fiction, forces to get done as per his wish becomes troublesome.

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Written on March 08, 2024

Submitted by brijmohan_p on March 09, 2024

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BrijMohan Poply

After my school I joined Indian Air Force and served for twenty years took release and served for nineteen years in Airports Authority of India and retired on 2006, settled in Harahua, Varanasi till date, I am writing poetry and songs since my childhood in Hindi and started writing in English by 2007 onwards also translated my many Hindi song and poems into English. Poems and songs writing is my passion. Thanks. more…

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