Analysis of When the Children Come Home

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



On a lonely selection far out in the West
An old woman works all the day without rest,
And she croons, as she toils 'neath the sky's glassy dome,
`Sure I'll keep the ould place till the childer come home.'

She mends all the fences, she grubs, and she ploughs,
She drives the old horse and she milks all the cows,
And she sings to herself as she thatches the stack,
`Sure I'll keep the ould place till the childer come back.'

It is five weary years since her old husband died;
And oft as he lay on his deathbed he sighed
`Sure one man can bring up ten children, he can,
An' it's strange that ten sons cannot keep one old man.'

Whenever the scowling old sundowners come,
And cunningly ask if the master's at home,
`Be off,' she replies, `with your blarney and cant,
Or I'll call my son Andy; he's workin' beyant.'

`Git out,' she replies, though she trembles with fear,
For she lives all alone and no neighbours are near;
But she says to herself, when she's like to despond,
That the boys are at work in the paddock beyond.

Ah, none of her children need follow the plough,
And some have grown rich in the city ere now;
Yet she says:  `They might come when the shearing is done,
And I'll keep the ould place if it's only for one.'


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF XBXA GGAX HHII
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 101001011001 11101101011 011111101101 11101110111 11101011011 11011011101 011101111001 11101110111 111101101101 0111111111 11111111011 111111101111 010010111 011101011 1110111101 1111110111 1110111111 11110101111 11110111111 101111001001 11101011001 01111001011 111111101011 011011111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,234
Words 244
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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