Analysis of Virgo Rising



Rising Virgo your innocence is shining. A look in your eyes has invited me to come and play with you. Your beautiful lines don an Oliver Twist that hides a hot burning fire.

The sun dims in shadow when you smile.
The flickering stars shimmer on your milky white skin.
The bluest skies unfold its glory in your eyes.

Your Mercury mind hold the waters back and I am in awe you want me to notice.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010110011001011101011101111100111100111011010 01101111 0100110111011 010101110011 110011010101101111110
Characters 400
Words 82
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 62
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

An observation of an austere woman dancing sexy to a song and teaching about diptych poetry.

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Written on November 11, 2024

Submitted by Oceanloveisland on March 03, 2024

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Amanda East

I grew up in Utah. I have four kiddos. I am now in a healthy happy relationship. I am spiritual, but not religious. I love thinking deeply about the purpose of life. more…

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