Analysis of WHAT ARE WE DOING?



What are we doing you and me?
Why are we killing the creatures of the sea?
Our oceans are dying because of our waste
Plastics of all kinds we have discarded in haste

Being swallowed by fish and mammals alike
It's a terrible thing we're doing to the creatures we like
Dying as their stomachs fill with indigestible plastic
We must act now as the situation's drastic

Stop we must, this terrible crime
We must stop it now before we run out of time
 All the creatures of the seas deserve better than this
Our future generation's will hate us for our remiss


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11110101 11110010101 1010110011101 101111101001 10101101001 101001110101011 10111011110 11111001010 11111001 111110111111 1010101011011 101001011111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 554
Words 107
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

A poem about plastic waste.

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Written on 2023

Submitted by george.ellis.lrps on February 19, 2024

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