Analysis of Alive again

Thembi Ndlovu 1994 (Johannesburg South)



Turmoil that has been burning in my chest is all gone.
The frustration that was a grudge has disappeared.
The fear of starting over is now history.
Forgiving myself is the first chapter.
Now the reality has sucked in....
This is my life and change is necessary.
I'll bend and make my own rules
I'll stick throughout the boundaries I set.
I'll pay no attention to man that's gonna mislead me.
My mind is sober and clear!
Healing in progress and accepting.
Lesson learnt, "life is an incredible journey with no manual".

Hardships have encouraged me to be an open minded person.
If ain't fighting for success then what value does life has?
Wisdom is when you let go and have enough maturity, seeking peace all the time.
The reward in life is simple given a second chance to rectify the mistakes and learning to crawl from nothing to something.


Scheme XXAXXAXXAXBX XXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 111110011111 00101101101 011101011100 010110110 1010110 1111011100 1101111 1101010011 11101011110011 1111001 10010010 10111101001011100 1010101111101010 11101011110111 101111101010100101101 0010111010010111000101011110110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 843
Words 165
Sentences 15
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 332
Words per stanza (avg) 75

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When you dead inside yet very alive on the outside Going through a lot then catch a breathe feel like a born against

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Written on December 21, 2023

Submitted by Thembilady23 on February 18, 2024

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