Analysis of The Outside Track

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



There were ten of us there on the moonlit quay,
And one on the for’ard hatch;
No straighter mate to his mates than he
Had ever said: ‘Len’s a match!’
'’Twill be long, old man, ere our glasses clink,
’Twill be long ere we grip your hand!'—
And we dragged him ashore for a final drink
Till the whole wide world seemed grand.
For they marry and go as the world rolls back,
They marry and vanish and die;
But their spirit shall live on the Outside Track
As long as the years go by.

The port-lights glowed in the morning mist
That rolled from the waters green;
And over the railing we grasped his fist
As the dark tide came between.
We cheered the captain and cheered the crew,
And our mate, times out of mind;
We cheered the land he was going to
And the land he had left behind.

We roared Lang Syne as a last farewell,
But my heart seemed out of joint;
I well remember the hush that fell
When the steamer had passed the point
We drifted home through the public bars,
We were ten times less by one
Who sailed out under the morning stars,
And under the rising sun.

And one by one, and two by two,
They have sailed from the wharf since then;
I have said good-bye to the last I knew,
The last of the careless men.
And I can’t but think that the times we had
Were the best times after all,
As I turn aside with a lonely glass
And drink to the bar-room wall.

But I’ll try my luck for a cheque Out Back,
Then a last good-bye to the bush;
For my heart’s away on the Outside Track,
On the track of the steerage push.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Metre 1011111011 011011 110111111 1101101 11111110101 11111111 01110110101 1011111 11100110111 11001001 11101110111 1110111 011100101 1110101 0100101111 1011101 110100101 01011111 110111101 00111101 11111011 1111111 110100111 10101101 110110101 1011111 111100101 0100101 01110111 11110111 1111110111 0110101 0111110111 0011101 1110110101 0110111 1111110111 10111101 1110110111 1011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,497
Words 304
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 12, 8, 8, 8, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 231
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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