Analysis of Darkness surrounding my light



Darkness surrounding my light ,
Left alone without insight ,
The family I crave is only a hidden grave,
The everlasting pain withers thru my veins,
Every hour I mold into the everlasting scold,
Never more willl I see the light ,
Damned me if all my might ,
Am I so darkened by all the hate that only evil can conceal my fate ?
Darkness surrounding my life ,
Being judged with the scars I hold ,
Destroyed by love ,
Destroyed by hate and everything man makes ,
A burdened soul who roams the earth hollow and alone with no place to call home ,
Darkness always surrounding my light


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Poetic Form
Metre 1001011 101011 0100111100101 0010110111 10010110100101 10111101 111111 1111011011101010111 1001011 10110111 0111 011101011 0101110110001111111 10101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 582
Words 115
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 454
Words per stanza (avg) 112

About this poem

Just a sad phase I went thru in my life and writing it down would lift my spirits each time.

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Written on January 23, 2012

Submitted by jln0910 on January 27, 2024

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Jessica Lynn Nash

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