Analysis of My life

Atul K 1979 (Punjab)



My Life has turned into,
Like it is a Facebook reel,
I tried to make them good,
But the wounds don't heal

I misplaced my charm,
Lost the vigorous zeal,
My heart is now a stone,
And it has lost the feel

Today the fate has played,
Just an unpleasant game,
I tried a lot to tackle it up,
But was not able to tame

In search of the happiness,
I emptied my entire pack,
Now where I can fetch bliss,
Just let me know some hack

The sky today looks shattered,
And sad seems the moon,
I know it will shine definitely,
If she promises to see me soon


Scheme XAXA XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111101 111011 111111 10111 10111 101001 111101 011101 010111 110101 110111011 1111011 0110100 11010101 111111 111111 0101110 01101 111111000 111001111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 542
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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It is all about separation phase....

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