Analysis of Immortality
Joshua Kinsel 1984 (San Antonio, tx)
Sharp the sting of the venom
Cold as it flows through my veins
Lava covers my skin red
Dark my vision is stained
Flames pour outta my nostrils
Sulphur burns my throat and tongue
Black my insides are dying
Death is spewed from my lungs
Dead I rose from the ashes
Alive but cold to the touch
White the red fades from my beard
Gray my emerald eyes flux
Black the blood drips from my wound
Deaf I can't hear through the ring
Sharp my blade cuts with a vengeance
Hardened my soul no longer sings
Blind my third eyes shows the future
Power released from the dragon
Complete my master grants immortality
Now I can work with no laggin
| Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKLMGNOPQRQ |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Etheree (25%) |
| Metre | 1011010 1111111 1010111 111011 1110110 1011101 1101110 111111 1111010 0111101 1011111 111011 1011111 1111101 11111010 10111101 11111010 10011010 0111010100 1111111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 626 |
| Words | 120 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 20 |
| Lines Amount | 20 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 506 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 120 |
About this poem
I thought about the devil granting immortality and the feeling of the tradition of Satans gift
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