Analysis of The Babies of Walloon
Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)
He was lengthsman on the railway, and his station scarce deserved
That “pre-eminence in sorrow” of the Majesty he served,
But as dear to him and precious were the gifts reclaimed so soon—
Were the workman’s little daughters who were buried near Walloon.
Speak their names in tones that linger, just as though you held them dear;
There are eyes to which the mention of those names will bring a tear.
Little Kate and Bridget, straying in an autumn afternoon,
Were attracted by the lilies in the water of Walloon.
All is dark to us. The angels sing perhaps in Paradise
Of the younger sister’s danger, and the elder’s sacrifice;
But the facts were hidden from us, when the soft light from the moon
Glistened on the water-lilies o’er the Babies at Walloon.
Ah! the children love the lilies, while we elders are inclined
To the flowers that have poison for the body and the mind.
Better for the “strongly human” to have done with life as soon,
Better perish for a lily like the Babies of Walloon.
For they gather flowers early on the river far away,
Where the everlasting lilies keep their purity for aye,
And while summer brings our lilies to the run and the lagoon
May our children keep the legend of the Babies of Walloon.
Scheme | AABB XXBB CCBB DDBB XXBB |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (60%) |
Metre | 1111010110101 111000101010011 111110100010111 0011010101011 111011101111111 111110101111101 10101010011001 00101010001011 11111010101010 10101010001010 101010111011101 10101010101011 101010101110101 101011101010001 101010101111111 10101010101011 111010101010101 10010101110011 0110110101010001 110101010101011 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,226 |
Words | 222 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 48 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 193 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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