Analysis of That Great Waiting Silence

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



Where shall we go for prophecy? Where shall we go for proof?
The holiday street is crowded, pavement, window and roof;
Band and banner pass by us, and the old tunes rise and fall—
But that great waiting silence is on the people all!

Where is the cheering and laughter of the eight-hour days gone by?
When the holiday heart was careless, and the holiday spirit high—
The friendly jostling and banter, the wit and the jovial call?
But that great waiting silence is over the people all.

Oh! but my heart beats faster—and a gush that was nearly tears:
Clatter of hammers on iron! and Australian Engineers!
Goods from Australian workshops—proud to the world at last
(And I see, in a flash from the future, Australian guns go past).

The morning sun-glare, softened by a veil, like frosted glass—
There is no breath of a head-breeze as the Labour banners pass,
There seems no sign of a danger or a change for the workers now—
But for some great, new-born spirit the banners seem to bow.

Where shall we go for our platforms? Where shall we go, indeed?
Shall we follow the cackle of women that follow the jesting Reid,
Through indifferent-seeming cities—and the browned men straight and tall?
But that great waiting silence is on the people all.

Twist and tangle and mystify, bully, and weep and bluff;
Marry the truth to a glaring lie, and say it is good enough;
Boast of your vice and villainy—in your virtue rant and bawl—
But that great waiting silence is over the people all!

Brothers, who work with shovel or pen, labour by day and night:
Brothers, who think of the hearts of men, ponder and speak and write;
Work for Australia’s destiny, content till you hear the call,
For the spirit that builds a nation is over the people all.


Scheme aabB ccbB xxdd eeff ggbB hhbB iibb
Poetic Form Quatrain  (86%)
Metre 11111100111111 0101110101001 10101110011101 1111010110101 1101001010110111 101011100010101 01010001001001001 11110101100101 111111000111101 101101100010101 110101110111 0110011010010111 01011101011101 11111011101101 1111101010110101 11111110010111 11111101111101 1110010110110011 101010100011101 1111010110101 1010010100101 1001101010111101 1111010110101 11110101100101 10111101111101 101110111100101 1111001011101 1010110101100101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,728
Words 313
Sentences 18
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 194
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:33 min read
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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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