Analysis of Atlantic City

Tia Sutter 1951 (NYC)



Over formica he said no,
no I can't, but thank you, and
what a nice offer.

Nice. I thought about the dark bus home the
overhead spotlights, the awful carpet the
chest charring embarassment
and the burning shame below.

Over coffee he said you know
I'm so sorry, are you hurt?
Oh no I said, no but thank you, and
what a nice thought.


Scheme ABX CCBA AXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 10010111 1111110 10110 1110101110 1011010100 1101 0010101 10101111 1110111 111111110 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 372
Words 77
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

I hope the spare language helps the reader feel the strain the would be lover experiences to keep her disappointment under control

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Written on December 01, 2024

Submitted by Absentia on December 04, 2023

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