Analysis of Aging



I spend my days on my phone
All alone, wondering if you might call
Or if you might not leave me alone at all,
All these rumours spreading wild
All I wish is that you were here awhile.

Lying lying on the ground, feels like a cloud
Wondering If I should wear the color brown
Will it make them judge and stare,
I wonder what to do with my hair
Concealer or mascara or both to wear
Wishing everyone would just not care.

Walking walking through the halls,
I feel there eyes upon the walls
I feel them stare.
Is it cause what I wear?
Or is it just because they care?
I wave past friends In the halls i feel them stare i hear they care

Walking walking down the hall
I feel them stare I hear them all
Wondering if i'm in the clear
All I hope is that they don't hear
Why can't I just be like all the rest
Happy pretty kind and silly

Finally home in the clear safe to shed all my tears
Lock the door hope they don't hear
  all these rumors i'm never in the clear
I get the text I get the calls I wonder if they'll stop at all
On to sleep  hopefully it's all a dream
And I'll never have to call this my reality.


Scheme XAAXX XXBBBB CCBBBB AADEXF XEDAXF
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1011001111 11111110111 110101 1111110101 10101011101 10011110101 1111101 110111111 110101111 10101111 1010101 11110101 1111 111111 11110111 111100111111111 1010101 11111111 10011001 11111111 111111101 10101010 1001001111111 1011111 1110110001 1101110111011111 1111001101 01101111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,114
Words 244
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 171
Words per stanza (avg) 45

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Written on November 23, 2023

Submitted by sarahvonboots on December 11, 2023

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