Analysis of Above Crow's Nest [Sydney]

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



A BLANKET low and leaden,
Though rent across the west,
Whose darkness seems to deaden
The brightest and the best;
A sunset white and staring
On cloud-wrecks far away—
And haggard house-walls glaring
A farewell to the day.

A light on tower and steeple,
Where sun no longer shines—
My people, Oh my people!
Rise up and read the signs!
Low looms the nearer high-line
(No sign of star or moon),
The horseman on the skyline
Rode hard this afternoon!

(Is he—and who shall know it?—
The spectre of a scout?
The spirit of a poet,
Whose truths were met with doubt?
Who sought and who succeeded
In marking danger’s track—
Whose warnings were unheeded
Till all the sky was black?)

It is a shameful story
For our young, generous home—
Without the rise and glory
We’d go as Greece and Rome.
Without the sacrifices
That make a nation’s name,
The elder nation’s vices
And luxuries we claim.

Grown vain without a conquest,
And sure without a fort,
And maddened in the one quest
For pleasure or for sport.
Self-blinded to our starkness
We’d fling the time away
To fight, half-armed, in darkness
Who should be armed to-day.

This song is for the city,
The city in its pride—
The coming time shall pity
And shield the countryside.
Shall we live in the present
Till fearful war-clouds loom,
And till the sullen peasant
Shall leave us to our doom?

Cloud-fortresses titanic
Along the western sky—
The tired, bowed mechanic
And pallid clerk flit by.
Lit by a light unhealthy—
The ghastly after-glare—
The veiled and goggled wealthy
Drive fast—they know not where.

Night’s sullen spirit rouses,
The darkening gables lour
From ugly four-roomed houses
Verandah’d windows glower;
The last long day-stare dies on
The scrub-ridged western side,
And round the near horizon
The spectral horsemen ride.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101010 110101 1101110 010001 011010 111101 0101110 01101 01110010 111101 1101110 110101 1101011 111111 010101 11101 1101111 010101 0101010 110111 1101010 010101 1100010 110111 1101010 11011001 0101010 111101 010100 110101 0101010 010011 1101010 010101 010011 110111 11011010 110101 1111010 111111 1111010 010011 0101110 01010 1110010 110111 0101010 1111101 1100010 010101 0101010 010111 1101010 010101 010110 111111 110101 0100101 1101110 11010 0111111 011101 0101010 01101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,750
Words 310
Sentences 18
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 64
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 174
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 11, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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