Analysis of [ Rabbit Whispers ]



The world sings to us:
   [ and we fall ]

Soft cobblestone of foundation; I love you
 Sound of thunder: I love you
  Snarling beast’s with shining opalized soul’s - bleeding ichor & wary: I love you

Is it: a bereft mind ? a hole an unnamed matron of time carried | passed on till their earthly death ?
 Us: quiet | unassumed, ask for awareness only in turn?

To turn;
 Idle ( as one would a beloved stone ) a thought of fondness as we walk in lockstep with eternity

Not!
 We roil, as a treasured paracosm - Diverged. A entity that thrives in your parallelity

Look!
 Your shadow - with its words and thoughts - assembled in piecemeal - unmoored - it grafted - a mirror to the sea - became - became - became
           [ Know! ]
 It Loves - it loves - it loves


Scheme XX AAA XB BC XC XXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 01111 011 1101010111 1110111 1011101110110111 110011011011011101111101 1101110101001 11 101110011011101110110100 1 111010101010011011 1 1111101010011110010101010101 1 111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 766
Words 157
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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Written on October 10, 2023

Submitted by pyxx.en on December 24, 2023

Modified by pyxx.en on December 24, 2023

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