Analysis of Dead but Alive



I breathe, walk, speak
on schedule,
just as a tree knows
when it’s leaves
should fall.
Gathering the strength
of ocean waves
as they crash
upon the shore,
I sometimes
force a smile.
In my eyes ,
the sun and moon
reflect the same.
Days and nights,
no difference.
The Earth continues
it’s rotation,
spinning, spinning,
as my loved ones
walk in blindness,
seeing only the me
that used to be.
If they would look
beyond the skin
perhaps they’d see
that a heart
can still beat
even when broken.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVVWXVYZR
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 110 11011 111 11 10001 1101 111 0101 101 101 011 0101 0101 101 1100 01010 1010 1010 1111 1010 101001 1111 1111 0101 0111 101 111 10110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 512
Words 108
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 380
Words per stanza (avg) 90

About this poem

Depression is invisible.

Font size:
 

Written on December 10, 2022

Submitted by Giselavigil on December 22, 2023

Modified by Giselavigil on December 22, 2023

32 sec read
136

Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

All Gisela Vigil poems | Gisela Vigil Books

16 fans

Discuss this Gisela Vigil poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Dead but Alive" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 17 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/176637/dead-but-alive>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    14
    days
    9
    hours
    57
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Sestina is made up of how many lines?
    A 36
    B 39
    C 28
    D 6