Analysis of Come into the valley

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Come into the valley

Come into the valley where Jesus's footprints ly forever in the dirt. Although he was 1000'ds of years ago he saw you then and he sees you now. His connection to us lives in our souls and nothing can keep him from you but yourself. The modern times we live in does not negate the need of him for us for he touched our souls on the day of life and to return to him we will one day. Leave most of the room in your heart for Jesus for he wants you always.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
Metre 1 101010 1010101111010001111111011111011111010111010101011111101010111011010111111111011011101011111111110101111011111
Characters 487
Words 100
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 127
Words per line (avg) 33
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Written on December 17, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on December 17, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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