Analysis of I'm Okay



Tragedy is within all,
Some think something must happen for it to show,
And others are just always on the cusp of the fall,
They hold and grip but silently wallow,
The pain and suffering are something they must swallow,
While there are ways to push the feeling away,
Some say they feel worse, and others are unlike themselves,
They want to feel, but not so much,
Sometimes it’s better to hide from others, then face the world and feel alone,
They try and try but the pain is too much to clutch,
The feeling of being a burden is the point of stopping,
Others ask and ask if they can help,
But the response will always be, “I’m okay,”
Family and friends don’t want to pry,
But they worry and desire to help,
They don’t want to give up, but it’s hard when they’re shut out,
The sadness gets darker, and the thoughts linger longer,
The darkness of their room and the comfort of their bed,
Is all that seems to calm their head,
They try to think happier,
And try to let others in,
But they just get sappier,
Their music seems to close out the feelings,
But they don’t want to be lost in their thoughts,
They strive for the outside world.
I want to be open, but the thoughts always win.


Scheme ABABBCDEFEGHCIHJKLLKMINOPM
Poetic Form
Metre 1001011 11101101111 010111101101 1101110010 0101001101110 11111101001 1111101010101 11111111 011101111011010101 110110111111 010110010101110 101011111 100111111 100011111 1110001011 1111111111111 0101100011010 0101110010111 11111111 1111100 0111100 11111 1101111010 1111111011 1110111 11111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,199
Words 250
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 914
Words per stanza (avg) 225

About this poem

The feeling of being lost and not wanting to burden those around you

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Written on October 25, 2023

Submitted by pilotjazzy on November 02, 2023

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Jasmine Bascetta

I'm 22 years old and from Spokane, WA. more…

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