Analysis of I thought we had something solid



I mean we both had the same intentions
But suddenly i turned into one of your temptations

Just yesterday you found me amusing
But today it is my heart that you're bruising

Although there's something that keeps me confused
It is  my emotions that feel reused

You manage to fill my heart with anxiety
But now let's include reality

In my mind , it is worry that you injected
So now I'm thinking I should've rejected


Scheme AA BB CC DD XX
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1111101010 11001101111010 110111010 10111111110 111011101 1110101101 110111110100 1110110 011111011010 11110110010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 424
Words 86
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

I wrote this poem because it is a way of pouring out my feelings . It helped me overcome my heartbreak

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Written on November 20, 2023

Submitted by mntima on November 29, 2023

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