Analysis of Fortunetelling



It was easy to walk away
Pink in hue was the clay-
"Turns matter into gold!" They exclaim.

Dimensions all at once, I stay
Will drop our needs from a different plane
Alchemy another way

Through the portals- matter arise
I look in the mirror and surmise
How much we see without our eyes!

There will be a big surprise
To the blind that do not seek to rise
But choose to rot in wealth with flies


Scheme AAX AXA BBB BBB
Poetic Form
Metre 11101101 101101 110011101 01011111 11101101001 1000101 10101001 110010001 111101101 1110101 101111111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 394
Words 83
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

A different take on Ascension or the Return (of Christ Consciousness).

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Written on November 05, 2023

Submitted by Bev11 on November 05, 2023

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Beverly Laskowski

Primarily raised in East Texas. Wife and mother of two. I'm a nurse who focuses on matters of the heart. more…

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