Analysis of When Will My Uber Arrive (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



When Will My Uber Arrive   (Bussokusekika)

I haven’t a clue
When my Uber will arrive
But that’s fine with me
I believe that I’m patient
I will just sit here and wait
When will my Uber arrive

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   11/28/2023


Scheme X XAXXXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110011 1101 1110101 11111 1011110 1111101 1111001 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 240
Words 44
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

I’m just sitting around killing time…For some silly reason this one popped into my head…Who are we trying to fool Juel???Why would I want to trade up from a common narci to an uncommon one???Besides…I doubt you’d ever want to leave your Illuminati family for someone such as little old me…Just as my common narci has chosen her path you have chosen yours…Just as I have chosen mine…Oh well…I wonder how long I’ll have to wait for my Uber to arrive to take me to my final destination???I doubt it will take 40 days for it to pick me up…I wonder how those perfect carefully orchestrated plans of ya’lls are going???lol…

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Written on November 28, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on November 28, 2023

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