Analysis of I Tried to Cry



I tried to cry, but neither eye
Would shed a single tear
The funeral was people full
Emotions were quite clear.

Alzheimer's took my mom away,
And yet I felt no grief.
The love I should have had that day
Was stolen by a thief.

Her ways with me stained everything
And so, it is still true
That fate will choose what it will bring,
And God will do that too!


Scheme XXXX ABAB CDCD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 11111101 110101 01001101 010011 1011101 011111 01111111 110101 0111110 011111 11111111 011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 356
Words 78
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

My mom was buried on 11-23-2008.

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Written on November 21, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on November 21, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on November 21, 2023

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