Analysis of The Winner Flame



THE WINNER FLAME

As a lightning in a bottle , shining in the sky
         As a warrior looking for his glory
As a pearl shining in the night
         Shinging on the moon light
As a winner has the flame
         Not a loser it's not the same
As a fire going to catch
         Catching the life from the death
As a pirate hunting the gold
         As i did in the cold
That is who i am , that who knows
        I knew the truth from the lies
I knew it , i realized
        I need my eyes closed to see
That we are so blind to see
      I do not care who you are
The only thing matter is who i am
       I do not care how much is fare
All i have to do is making noise in the calm
      Breaking silence in the darck
As a color named black
      Even nothing has a name
As i saw you i had wise
       That you will never get the flame .


Scheme A BCDDAAXXEEXFXCCXXXXBXAFA
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 1010001010001 10100101110 10110001 11011 1010101 10101101 10101011 1001101 10101001 111001 11111111 1101101 111110 1111111 1111111 1111111 0101101111 11111111 111111101001 1010001 101011 1010101 1111111 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 853
Words 186
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 24
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 283
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Written on November 16, 2023

Submitted by melkharraz26 on November 16, 2023

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