Analysis of Presence of my Father

Deborah Nataly Perez 1984 (Los Angeles, CA)



Be who you are,
Not where you were meant to be.

Do today,
Not what you did last night.

Take from the present,
Not from a past unseen.

Do as you may,
Not what you might have done.

So with the real,
With the mask unworn.

Be as you may,
Not who you may want to be.

Do with your will,
What you were meant in life.

Walk in the light,
As you were unwilling to see in the dark.

Walk only by Faith,
For Satan has no dominion over you there!!


Scheme XA BC XD BX XD BA XX CX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1110111 101 111111 11010 110101 1111 111111 1101 1011 1111 1111111 1111 110101 1001 11001011001 11011 110110101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 441
Words 117
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

Is going to talk about the past, present Anna future struggles and trials and tribulations that we endure and overcome Anna about how is in keeping yourself confident sand loving yourself bcuz you are only dependent on yourself for your own happiness

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Written on January 19, 2023

Submitted by deborahp.62108 on November 13, 2023

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Deborah Nataly Perez

Deborah Nataly Perez is this nine years of age and she was born in Los Angeles, CA but moved to Cynthiana, KY at the age of nine and has resided here ever since. She is a proud mother of the beautiful children… Two girls and one boy and she spends most of her time and days with her eleven month old grandson whom is her whole world! She babysits him while her daughter goes to college so that she is able to succeed in becoming an RN and while she works as well. Writing is her first passion and is hopeful to be able to inspire many others by publishing her work. more…

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