Analysis of An Ode to Pain

Dinah Cooper 2001 (los angeles ca)

Ode


i can think
but i cant move
everyone moves around me
like a sleep paralysis

i cant run
i cant hide
i am lost
stuck in the eternal darkness

im smiling
im laughing
but do you know
i hurt more than anything

deep in the ocean
of sorrow and pain
i am deep in the ocean of darkness
and i cant swim

i am drowning
hoping someone will save me
save me please
but no one does

i am gone lost
in this abyss of darkness
of pain and sorrow
i love you still


Scheme XXAB CXDB EEFE CXBX EAXX DBFX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1111 101011 1010100 111 111 111 10001010 110 110 1111 111110 10010 11001 1110010110 0111 1110 101111 111 1111 1111 0101110 11010 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 447
Words 100
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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Written on November 08, 2023

Submitted by joanaj.93789 on November 08, 2023

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