Analysis of Kintsugi
The moment comes,
when petals defy gravity
when the pen runs out of ink
When you sigh
at the sight, of porcelain China
dropping from the highest of points
Limbs grow numb
settling into the cozy indentation
of the fetal position
Skin beneath your swollen,
heavy lids
expanding with the salt
created by saddened pupils
These moments come
even to stay for the long haul
yet even the sun goes to sleep,
only to wake up every morning
showering those petals with nourishment,
the comfort of the warmest set of rays
You reach across the translucent,
rough edges of the whitest paper
pushing, scratching
pressing for a streak of black
looking at the smooth line
created by the fingers of perseverance
You see the crack cemented
within your precious china
seemingly broken, yet lustrous
in beauty and form
with a smile you gently place this piece
back where it belongs
Yes,
these moments come to all
even to those placed firm on the ground,
face towards the sun.
Though being broken, we are still being used
to give love, hope, relate to the unknowing
Yes,
when we are weak, we are powerful
Scheme | xxx xax bcc cxxx bdxefx fxexxx xaxxxx Gdxc xe Gx |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101 11001100 1011111 111 101110010 10101011 111 10001010010 1010010 101110 101 010101 01011010 1101 10111011 11001111 1011110010 1001101100 0101010111 11010010 110101010 1010 1010111 101011 01010101010 1101010 0111010 10010110 01001 101110111 11101 1 110111 101111101 10101 11010111101 11110110010 1 111111100 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,116 |
Words | 232 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 4, 6, 6, 6, 4, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 87 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
If you’re not familiar with Kintsugi, it’s a Japanese art expressed through pottery. It’s all about repairing what’s broken. My poem is about rising above the broken.
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