Analysis of My response to "Hello"



Hello,It's me
I am not the best but know that I am really trying to be
We’re not perfect, you see.
We all strive to be our best but sometimes pain takes over me
Hello, can you hear me
We’re only human so don't fault us for just being a human being
I have no answer, it seems
Maybe we should come to together and work out this problem, please
This is difficult and worry some,what is the next step now
Hello from the darkside, my world seems not to have light
Cause without you my life just isn't as bright
I need you to come and brighten my life
Hello from the inside,my heart just isn't beating right
I know that you are who's taken my heart
But I'll fight for the love,even though we're apart
Hello,It's me
I was just calling to see what kind of state your mind might be
I keep hearing..your voice inside,
Maybe my feelings are corrupted though no longer I can not hide
It's no secret,,we could've been the best two ones combined


Scheme AaaaabcdeffgfhhAaiij
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1110111111101011 010111 1111110110111101 011111 010101111111001010 1111011 1011110100111101 111000101110111 011011111111 10111111011 1111101011 011011110101 1111111011 1111011101 11 111101111111111 111101 10110101011101111 111001011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 937
Words 189
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 724
Words per stanza (avg) 180

About this poem

These are lyrics or poetry in response to Adele‘s song hello.

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Written on June 29, 2022

Submitted by Mactrix75 on November 07, 2023

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LeJuan M McAliley

Hi, I am a 48 year-old man down to earth just live in my life the best I can. I put God first and everything I do. It’s just me and my daughter,that’s my heart. I love jot down things and write down things in my spare time,listening to songs and rewriting my own version. more…

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